Phoenix
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I will rise from my own personal ashes
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Post by Phoenix on Mar 19, 2010 10:41:19 GMT -5
Your Name: Paul Your Age: 15 Other Characters: Rogue, Regnet Role-Play Type: Intermediate --- Name: Jean Grey Codename: Phoniex Nickname(s): Jean Gender: Female Age: 20 Status: X-Men Canon: Yes Typical Wardrobe: Jean dresses usually in valley girl type outfits, usually jeans, t-shirts, or khakis. Jean, unlike some of her fellow X-Men, buys all designer clothing from London Fog coats to Gucci boots.Physical Description: Jean is fair skinned with high cheekbones and flaming red hair. She has an average build, and is taller than most women her age. Powers: Very strong telekenisis and some telepathy Personality: Jean can be fun and lighthearted, but at times, gets outrageously angry, and vengeful Strengths: Her telekenisis is her best strength, as she can move and hold objects as big as helicopters with some effort Weaknesses: Her anger often causes her to lose control of her powers, as does any other extremely strong emotion Random: Her favorite food from McDonald's is chicken niggets History: Born to John and Elaine Grey, Jean's powers emerged when her friend Annie was killed in a car crash. She went to Xavier's School after the Professor put mental blocks to block her full power. She eventually broke through these blocks completely, and now has her full, developed powers. Jean, although she sometimes loses control and harms others, has remained with the X-Men. --- RP Example: (diff site)"This how we'll sing, oh. This is how we'll stand when...." Raphael turned the stereo off. Paramore's "Let The Flames Begin" had been one of his favorite songs, but he found himself no longer able to listen to it. His eyes traveled to his desk, where the letter sat. From it. He'd almost torn it apart, but he saved as evidence for the police and his parents. They hadn't let him return to school since the broadcast, insisting that his homework could be sent home through email. Raphael felt trapped in the Manhattan apartment, and he got up, looking down at the city that for so long had been his safehaven. Now it seemed it was a battlefield.
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Triple K
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Post by Triple K on Mar 19, 2010 18:26:25 GMT -5
I'm afraid I can't accept this yet. There are word minimums that haven't been reached.
Her typical wardrobe is 31 words long. It needs to be at least fifty.
Her physical description is 24 words long. It needs to be at least one hundred and fifty.
Her strengths need to be at least one hundred words. You have twenty.
Weaknesses, also, have to be one hundred words long. You have eighteen. Also, you have included one weakness. You need three.
History, although I previously thought it had to be three hundred words, needs to be at a minimum of two hundred. You have 63 words. Also, please go a little more in-depth, please. Use any sources if you need help.
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Phoenix
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I will rise from my own personal ashes
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Post by Phoenix on May 2, 2010 23:18:21 GMT -5
Your Name: Paul Your Age: 15 Other Characters: Rogue, Regnet Role-Play Type: Intermediate --- Name: Jean Grey Codename: Phoniex/Dark Phoenix Nickname(s): Jean Gender: Female Age: 20 Status: X-Men Canon: Yes Typical Wardrobe: Jean dresses usually in valley girl type outfits, usually jeans, t-shirts, or khakis. Jean, unlike some of her fellow X-Men, buys all designer clothing from London Fog coats to Gucci boots. And while she appreciates the finer clothes in life, she can be seen in flannel pjs, and regular t-shirts. While it's unlikely to see her in uniform (pictured above) unless on a mission, she can be seen wearing it sometimes. Physical Description: Jean can turn men’s heads without even trying, it’s due of course to the woman’s striking beauty. Her eyes are usually the first thing to capture anyone, a deep emerald green that holds intelligence and gentleness inside. Along with those green eyes is the wealth of dark red locks that fall past her shoulders in long layers that frame a face of flawless ivory skin and high cheek bones. She is physically fit due to all the training she goes through as one of the X-men her frame slender but well muscled. Powers: Very strong telekenisis and some telepathy. She can also mask herself from other mutants and psychics, though this can be overridden. Jean can also, using her telekinetic ability, create heat molecules and completely disentegrate objects, including people. Personality: Jean is a very easy person to get along with given her gentle nature; she usually has a smile and a kind word for everyone. She knows what it is like to be different as her own experiences have taught her, she is a shoulder to cry on or someone to talk to who will listen and not judge. She tries to give good sound advice to those who ask for it and help better everyone’s lives as well as her own. She exhibits a strong sense of calm and understanding whenever she is around people putting them instantly at ease with her.
Though Jean has a caring personality she is far from being a push over, she is very confident in herself and independent. She can be very bold and opinionated and has no problem speaking her mind if she feels it is important enough to voice. Jean stands up for what she believes in and though she is usually a calm collected person she does have a temper. It takes a lot to anger her but when she is mad you know it, she can hold a grudge as anyone else can and has done so on occasion for weeks on end. Strengths: Her telekenisis is her best strength, as she can move and hold objects as big as helicopters with some effort. Her powers can be used for telepathic defense. She can mentally mask her own presence, from being detected by other psychics, and go one step further; masking the presence of those she is with as well. This defense mechanism is not perfect and can be detected by other powerful mutants. A method that works better is the creation of a psionic shield. Jean can also mentally manipulate the mind patterns of other mutants, making them undetectable by other psychics and devices such as cerebro. Jean'stelekinetic power gives her the ability to lift herself and objects using her mind. This ability also allows her to manipulate molecules, which can then be use to create a protective force field or to stimulate heat molecules which generate concussive force.
Weaknesses: Her anger often causes her to lose control of her powers, as does any other extremely strong emotion. Jean relies more on her powers in combat then she does hand to hand combat though she does know how to do so. She trains both physically and mentally as much as she can to keep herself ready if a battle ensues. Jean has a lot of self-doubts regarding her powers. There is also fear there that keeps her from reaching her full potential with her powers; she does not wish to lose control as she has seen others do before. She respects her own abilities and powers and wishes to always maintain control so she doesn’t hurt those she cares for the most. Random: Her favorite food from McDonald's is chicken niggets History: Jean Grey was born the daughter of Dr. John Grey and Elaine Grey. Before joining the X-Men, she lived with her family in Annandale-on-Hudson, New York, where Dr. Grey worked as a history professor at Bard College. Jean is the only member of her immediate family with mutant abilities. Her powers first manifest at the age of ten, prematurely triggered when her best friend, Annie Richards, is hit by a car. As her friend lies dying, Jean instinctively links to her mind and senses what Annie feels when she dies; the trauma of experiencing her friend's death nearly kills Jean as well, but instead leaves her in a coma. Xavier realizes that Jean's young mind cannot yet cope with her abilities, so he telepathically blocks her access to them, allowing her powers to evolve at a more natural pace. Jean develops her telekinetic powers at the age of 13. As a teenager, Jean leaves her parents to attend Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters. In an attempt to free Charles Xavier, Scott, and several kidnapped students from a compound in Alkali lake, Jean sacrificed herself for the sake of the entire team. She did what she felt she had to do, she was the only one with the power to save them all. It was believed that Jean Grey died that day, but that was far from the truth. The Phoenix had made its presence known and possessed the body of Jean Grey.
Jean was reincarnated, but the Phoenix consumed her. It had complete control over her, and it gave her an unbelievable amount of power. Power that did no good. A side of Jean was shown to the world that never existed before, there was an evil in her that was capable of things she'd never imagine doing. She 'killed' the love of her life. She sided with the man who tried to destroy them on countless occasions, and fought against those she had once called friends. She created a path of destruction, and killed more people than she could count. Though she was thought to have been killed, Jean returned again, fully in control of the Phoenix and her powers. She still uses Phoenix as a codename and is known as such by the Xavier Students. b]
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RP Example: Jean had finally done it. She'd finally gotten control over the Phoenix. The lust, rage, passion, joy had all been rushing furiously inside her. She knew what the Phoenix had done in her name. She couldn't honestly believe she'd been welcomed back into the school with open arms, after not ressurecting from the dead not once, but twice. Jean knew she had to accept the facts for what they were: The Phoenix was her, and she was the Phoenix.
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Triple K
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Post by Triple K on May 4, 2010 18:13:23 GMT -5
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